Your celestial smile engulfs all my woes,
Your angelic voice conveys a divine message,
Your miraculous sensation cleanses me of all sins,
Your pulsating steps power my heartbeats,
Your statuesque figure inspires life in my body,
But your absence makes me think,
How deeply embedded you are in me,
How inextricably entwined our lives are,
How intensely amalgamated our souls are,
How strongly we are bonded, body, mind and heart.
Desert Rose
14th, February, 2010
New Delhi.
8 comments:
Good one, as usual...
after so long.....nice one
@ Pathfinder: Thanks.....so it is usual because it is good or is it just usual :)
@Pragya: Thanks...
Very nice, but I do have a complaint. The vocabulary becomes a bit too much sometimes and I need to look up into a dictionary... I feel if you use a little simpler language, it will increase the flow of emotions and make the poem more enjoyable.
But still, very beautiful thoughts!
@ The Born Traveler: Have taken serious note of your complaint. Hopefully you will not have the same in future. and thanks for your generous applause.
perfect description of the picture and its extension into life and its flip-side !
bravo!!
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